Haven't had time to look at any of these, but just for future reference, your information fields are a little messed up.
Evil Space Tomato wrote:
Connections: (Heretic) Uses the death animation from the Undead Warrior
Connections are only if you use the same actors, sprites or sounds (same filename or same sound, or whatever) as another actor on the Beastiary. For example, you said the Bone Eater has similar sounds as the Vulgar. Things like that aren't necessary to mention.
Melee: Pops off its head and sprays bugs at you
It's just a yes or no as to whether or not it has a melee state.
Added States: Once it enters its, melee attack mode it will spray clouds of bugs forever
"Added states" is only used to say if the monster, weapon, item, etc. relies on a state added into a player class or another monster, not if states have been added to this monster.
Hope that clears things up. These monsters do look pretty interesting.